Advice

Okay, so I don't really know if anyone actually looks at this website anymore, but if you do... advice is always welcome.  I don't care what you have to tell me; if it'll help me, I can take it (I'm a big girl!)!!!  Constructive criticism?  AWESOME!  So please, if anyone is out there... it's okay to tell me if something is suckish!
:D  Thanks.
VOLDEMORT CAN'T STOP THE ROCK!